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The Lavallee Enterprise was the first space ship of its kind. It had a crew of six people: three girls three guys. It was soon to be the first space ship to leave the solar system. With its new cruse drive, it should be able to make the round trip from Earth to out side the Solar system and back in ....
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.... the Lavallee Enterprise in 2001. Three years later it got finish. It was launched on the twenty-eighth of January in the year 2004. After two months the ship was now approaching the end of the Solar system. So far there had been no signs of any other ships using the cruse drive.
There was one more planet to cross before they would leave the Solar system. They took notice of the planet. It was a beautiful huge planet with lots of colours. It would take them another two days to cross over it.
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